MAKDI KI JAAL

Jun 17 2008  | Views 244 |  Comments  (8)
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  downtoearth posted 2 mnths ago

bina dear,
bahut bahut shukriya!
rgds
dte



  downtoearth posted 2 mnths ago

dear yash ji,
aap ka bahut bahut shukriya! 
my fourteen year old son asked me hindi for spider web and as i was telling him the meaning i thought of the differences between the spider web and entangled web of lies by man and felt like writing down few lines 
aap kitna khayaal rakhte hai sabkaa, mujhe yeh baat maaloom nahi thi ke yeh topic contest ke liye rakha gaya hai!
 aaj jab main log on karke scroll kiya to Opulence dwara post kiya contest ke results mein padha. 
ek baar phir tahe-dil-se aapka shukriya karti hun!
rgds
dte



  downtoearth posted 2 mnths ago

dear rajee ji,
thanks a lot for your feedback and the encouragement.
rgds
dte



  downtoearth posted 2 mnths ago

hey bhavna,
i am doing pretty well, i have to thank dear God for that, thanks for asking. 
thanks for your lovely comments dear. 
is duniya mein itna aadambar hai ke kabhi kabhi to vishwaas uthne lagtaa hai, par jeene ka matlab hai apne par vishwaas aur uparwaale par aasthaa ke sahaare is aadambar se ladnaa!!! 
cheers
dte

 



  binagupta posted 2 mnths ago

dte
bemisaal yeh makdi ka jaal



  yash chhabra posted 2 mnths ago

Wah!!Bahut hi khoobsoorat  kavita likhihai aap ne  contest ke liye.....Glad to see you after a long....yash



  rajee kushwaha posted 2 mnths ago

Dear DTE,
   you have rightly diffrentiated the reasons for the SPIDER and the MAN to weave a web--one is for survival, the other is for forgery and cheating. It is a wonderful take on SPIDER WEB. impressive thoughts beautifully conveyed. If only HUMANs listen to the message. regards. Rajee.



  bhavna14 posted 2 mnths ago

Hiyaa DTE,,

gd to c u here... hope u r doin well.. :-)
luvedd readin ur poem.. vryyy wel written ..  
wohhh kehte hain na kar bhala toh ho bhala... i guess tat holds true.. n ifff u do bad,, thn worse wil hit u someday for sure on ur face,,, so y playyy those dirty games... bttt tatzzz d nature of d beast i guesssss... 

rgds
Bhavna





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