Somehow it does not look proper
Somehow it seems out of order
It is difficult to picture these together
To me these seem just out of order
Children, shouldn’t they be elsewhere
Instead they seem ready to open fire
Shocking it is to see a child with a gun
Wonder how much time it will take for us to shun
To see mankind in such plight
Hardly can see the future as bright
Disabling it is to see a child as man
How low can one stoop to being inhuman
Resilience makes us humans fight
It also helps us not to be out of sight
Hope and prayers they will be properly placed
As children they should live, not displaced
Somehow it does not look proper
Somehow it seems out of order
It is difficult to picture these together
To me these seem just out of order
Tiger and pig co-existing
Nature finds itself resisting
The two exist at two different levels
By nature the two can not be at level
Difficult to imagine the two to be friends
As one thrives, for the other the life ends
Such is the order of the ecology
Variation determined by biology
One is happy to be in a pig-pen
The other lives alone in his own den
One is happy to with the herd
Tiger with its clan, that is unheard
Close
dte
enjoyed both poems and your angle was different
cheers
bina
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welcome to my blog madhuri. thanks for your lovely comments!
cheers
dte
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Wow beautiful poem. Very good flow of words and thoughts.
Cheers,
Madhuri
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hey meera,
thank you so much for your encouraging words! the pictures put at an unease and thus the flow of words!
thanks once again for your best wishes and wish you the same.(i keep forgetting it is a contest)
cheers
dte
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Wow dte!!! Thats a terrific one! Wonderful take to the cotest! I HOPE U WIN!!!!!
All the very very best!
Cheers
Meera
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hey bhavna,
thanks for your lovely comments and thanks for the reco (i always forget to thank for the recommedation, in future i will try to remember)
regards
dte
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Hello DTE..
tatzzzzz a pretty neattt verse... loved d way u attached both d pics into one poem.. jst loveddd d thought process here wen u mention abt d characterstics of tiger & pig in last stanza... vryyy nice written... best of luck for d contest..
rgds
Bhavna
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dear nidhana,
thanks for dropping by and thanks for your valuable comments
regards
dte
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correction.. i am touched by your comments!!! (have no idea how to edit the comment blog)
sorry
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dear harryandhelen,
thanks so much for your precious comments.
regards
dte
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