EXPRESS YOURSELF CONTEST WEEK 19 - FEELINGS

Mar 31 2008  | Views 596 |  Comments  (38)
GRAINS OF SAND Grains of sand under the feet A feeling so neat Soft and warm Feels like a balm... Expand

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  downtoearth posted 4 mnths ago

hey supriya welcome to my blog! 
i am glad you like the two poems, thanks for you comments dear.
cheers
dte



  supriyad posted 4 mnths ago

That was nice Down to earth. The first poem - the repeated mentions of grains of sand - had a lyrical touch to them :) The picture is very beautiful. ALmost refreshing.

The second one - its witty - and the irony of evolution comes across strongly :)

Liked them both! :) Good luck for the contest :)



  downtoearth posted 4 mnths ago

dear poet,
thanks for visiting my blog!  
wonderful lines from a poet!
dte



  Poetbleu posted 4 mnths ago

DTE:
I like the way it flows
o'er wet painted toes.  
Writing from your heart
you turn'd alphabet to art.

Bravo!

 



  downtoearth posted 4 mnths ago

dear rajee,
thanks for your words! you said it..... self destuctive nature..... isn't that a pity after all that evolution!!! well it is not that bad, some have actually evolved so there is still hope!!!
thanks for visiting my blog
cheers
dte



  downtoearth posted 4 mnths ago

dear reflector,
i am touched by your comments! thanks so much.
nice to see you again!
regards
dte



  rajee kushwaha posted 4 mnths ago

Dear DTE,
   I loved the poetic rhythem and the thoughts expressed in the poem. there is avery deep meaning in your theme.It is a reflection of man's self destructive nature and the frequent quarrels for non-issues. Exceleent. I liked the lines:-


Perhaps our behaviors we should evaluate
For they are our children, our behaviors they imitate!!!

Regards. Rajee



  reflector posted 4 mnths ago

down to earth
your poems are out of this world...very well written

reflector



  downtoearth posted 4 mnths ago

hi sue,
thanks for your encouragement.
regards
dte



  Sue Menon posted 4 mnths ago

Beautiful!

Simply loved both the poems.

Sue 





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